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素質教育篇
（一）
根據中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內容不計入總詞數。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李華，你們學校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動，倡議大家制作關于安全教育的主題海報，你們班交換生Peter給你發郵件詢問相關事情。請用英語回復一封郵件，告訴他海報上交的時間，并分享你設計海報的一些想法。
提示詞語：design，safety
rule，careful，protect，picture
提示問題：When
should
you
hand
in
the
poster?What
would
you
like
to
share
with
Peter
about
designing
the
poster?
Dear
Peter,
I＇m
glad
to
receive
your
email
______________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If
there
is
anything
more
that
I
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【寫作思路】
這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫一封郵件，告訴他關于制作關于安全教育的主題海報的相關事宜。由題目中給出的提示問題可知，短文中應包括以下內容：首先告訴Peter海報上交的時間；然后和他分享一些設計海報的想法。第二個內容應該是短文的主體。題目中并沒有規定具體的寫作內容，學生們應聯系自己的實際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內容補充完整后，用正確的英語表達出來，這是寫作中的一個難點。短文應以一般現在時為主、第一、二人稱來敘述。寫作時應注意：首先要合理安排短文內容，敘述應有層次、有條理�？梢允褂靡恍┍硎鞠群箜樞虻脑~或短語，如First,
Second,
Last
but
not
least等等。題目中給出的提示詞應該在短文中用上。其次應注意文章的表達，英語句式的結構與漢語是不同的，因此不能根據漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結構，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復合句、非謂語動詞等復雜結構。同時語句之間使用恰當的連接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達流暢。
【滿分范文】
Dear
Peter,
I＇m
glad
to
receive
your
email.
As
it
is
required，you
are
supposed
to
hand
in
the
poster
before
next
Friday.
Being
your
close
friend，I
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.
First
and
foremost，the
basic
safety
rules
are
of
great
importance，which
should
be
included
in
your
poster.
In
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school.
Last
but
by
no
means
least，if
I
were
you，I
would
add
a
few
suggestions
about
safety
awareness，considering
that
better
safe
than
sorry.
In
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.
If
there
is
anything
more
that
I
can
help
with,
please
let
me
know.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇優秀的作文，短文作者根據題目要求，給Peter寫郵件，告訴他制作主題海報的一些事情。短文有以下幾個優點：首先文章內容完整，結構清晰，符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開頭和結尾，短文主要包括兩個內容：第一段用一句話告訴Peter上交海報的時間；文章的中心和重點是放在了第二段上，這一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海報的想法。主要從四個方面進行闡述，內容非常詳實，并使用了First
and
foremost,
In
the
second
place,
Last
but
by
no
means
least,
In
addition等短語，分清了這一段的層次，敘述非常有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態和人稱，語法規范，用詞準確，并使用了較復雜的句式結構，表現了作者較強的語言運用能力。短文中較好的句型有：Being
your
close
friend，I
am
extremely
willing
to
share
some
ideas
about
designing
the
poster
with
you.、In
the
second
place，following
the
safety
rules
is
so
meaningful
and
crucial
that
you
had
better
remind
your
readers
of
its
significance
and
advise
them
to
be
careful
both
in
and
out
of
school、In
addition，it
is
a
good
idea
for
you
to
draw
a
few
pictures
on
your
poster
so
as
to
make
it
more
lively
and
acceptable.等。
（二）
日前某校進行了題為“有壓力向誰說”的問卷調查（結果如圖），請你根據要求寫一篇英語短文參加該校的征文活動。向老師傾訴
向朋友傾訴
向家長傾訴
不跟任何人說
內容包括：1.
簡要描述調查結果；
2.
你喜歡向誰傾訴壓力？為什么？
3.
提出2條緩解壓力的建議。
要求：1.
文章必須包括所給要點，但不要逐條翻譯，可進行適當拓展；
2.
書寫規范，80—100詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
3.
文中不得出現真實校名、人名。
When
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
Here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】
When
teens
have
stress,
they
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
different
people.
Here
are
the
results
about
our
survey.
Thirty-five
percent
of
students
will
talk
about
their
stress
to
their
teachers,
forty
percent
of
students
will
talk
to
their
friends,
only
fifteen
percent
of
students
talk
to
their
parents
but
only
ten
percent
of
students
talk
to
nobody.
For
me,
I
like
to
tell
my
friends
about
the
pressure,
because
we
are
all
the
same
age,
they
sometimes
feel
the
same
as
us
.and
we
can
communicate
with
and
understand
each
other
easily.
But
as
a
student,
we
should
learn
to
relieve
stress.
First
of
all,
we
should
properly
face
the
pressure.?Stress
is
everywhere
in
our
daily
life,
so
we
can＇t
be
afraid
of
them
and
try
our
best
to
deal
with
them.
Secondly,
we
can
listen
to
light
music
or
do
some
proper
sports,
which
can
let
us
relax.
Finally,
believe
in
yourself.
We
should
believe
in
ourselves.
We
can
deal
with
any
trouble
with
the
help
of
ourselves
or
others.
Stress
is
everywhere
and
we
must
face
the
pressure
properly.
【解析】
1.
題干解讀：本篇文章屬于話題性＋圖表型作文，根據圖表內容說明不同的人對壓力的訴說對象不同的情況，文中會較多的使用數字說明，做一個對比，然后闡述自己的壓力喜歡對誰說以及原因，并且提出該如何緩解壓力的幾條建議。建議可以從自身實際出發，自己平時是如何緩解壓力的可以一起分享。
2.
例文點評：文章采取三段式，第一段對圖表內容進行闡述，以及闡述自己喜歡向誰訴說壓力和為什么？第二段主要給出一些緩解壓力的建議，第三段做一個總結，概括壓力無處不在，但是要正視壓力。文章結構完整。段落銜接很好，語言表達清晰準確，語句簡單易懂。
3.
高分亮點：
短語：talk
about；the
same
as；communicate
with；deal
with；be
afraid
of。
句型：so引導的并列句；because引導的原因狀語從句；
（三）
xxxx呼吁：“共同呵護好孩子的眼睛,讓他們擁有一個光明的未來”,為此,學校
廣播站邀請你寫一篇關于保護視力的倡議書,請根據以下信息寫一篇文章：
現
狀
1.
越來越多的孩子帶上了眼鏡；2.
超過
70%的初中生近視；3.
父母和老師為此擔憂；
原
因
1.
學習；2.
電子產品；3.
缺少睡眠；
建
議
1.
每天至少做兩次眼保健操；
2.
多進行戶外運動；
3.
健康飲食；
……
視力差：have
poor
eyesight
要求：
1.
所寫內容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并適當發揮；
2.
文章不少于
90
詞,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數；
3.
語意通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規范；
4.
文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名等信息。
Poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
It’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
It
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
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【滿分范文】
Poor
eyesight
is
a
serious
problem
among
the
youth
of
our
country.
It’s
amazing
that
the
situation
is
going
from
bad
to
worse.
It
is
time
that
we
take
the
problem
seriously.
At
present,
more
and
more
students
wear
glasses,
over
70
%
of
the
middle
school
students
have
poor
eyesight.
Both
parents
and
teachers
are
worried
about
it.
Here
are
some
main
causes.
First,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
Second,
some
students
even
like
to
watch
TV
or
use
computers
for
a
long
time.Third,
some
students
may
not
have
enough
sleep.
In
order
to
have
good
eyesight,
we
should
do
eye
exercises
at
least
twice
a
day.
We
can
also
try
to
do
more
sports
in
our
spare
time.
We
had
better
eat
healthy
food.
Of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
For
example,
we
shouldn’t
read
in
the
sun
or
in
bed.
I
think
all
of
us
should
understand
the
importance
of
protecting
eyes
and
try
our
best
to
protect
them.
【解析】
題干分析：這是一篇要求寫一篇關于保護視力的倡議書，響應xxxx呼吁：“共同呵護好孩子的眼睛,讓他們擁有一個光明的未來”，觀察提示表格，寫作內容要包括目前的現在，還有產生這些問題的原因，已經提出的相關建議。
例文點評：這是一篇優秀的例文，很好的完成了試題規定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確的運用的時態，例文中運用的是一般現在時。例文第一段首先提出了目前我國青少年視力不良的社會問題；第二段詳細的介紹了產生問題的三點原因；第三段提出有效的建議，號召保護視力。例文還使用了一些亮點詞句，增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。
高分亮點：
短語：At
present目前；more
and
more越來越多；be
worried
about擔心；too
much太多；like
to
do
sth喜歡做某事；In
order
to
sth為了做某事；at
least至少；try
one’s
best
to
do
sth盡某人最大努力做某事；eye
exercises眼保健操；in
one’s
spare
time在某人空閑時間。
句型：（1）First,
some
students
spend
too
much
time
reading
or
doing
their
homework
without
a
rest.
Sb.
spend
time
(in)
doing
sth某人花費時間做某事；（2）Of
course,
it
is
important
to
have
a
good
habit
of
using
our
eyes.
It
is
+adj.
(for
sb.)
to
do
sth(對某人來說)做某事時怎樣的。
（四）
假如你是李華，你的表妹Lily面對即將到來的期末考試，壓力很大，這幾天甚至出現了失眠的狀況，請你給她寫一封電子郵件，幫助她盡快調整好狀態迎接考試。
提示詞：
relaxed；
music；
exercise；
believe
in
要求:
1.
參考提示詞,可適當發揮
2.
語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整；
3.
文中不得出現任何真實信息(姓名、校名、地名等)
4.
詞數：不少于70詞。(開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。)
Dear
Lily,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,Li
Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear
Lily,
I＇m
sorry
that
I
heard
from
you.
I
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
This
happened
to
me.
Let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice.
You
can
do
something
you
like
to
relax
yourself.
For
example,
I
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
I
exercise
regularly
to
increase
my
ability
to
work
under
pressure.
We
have
to
learn
to
believe
in
ourselves.
If
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try.
I
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
Yours,Li
Hua
【解析】
1.題干解讀：該題目屬于信件寫作，要求根據來信寫回信，信件內容應該完整地給出相關建議，幫助她盡快調整好狀態迎接考試。適當使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時，再閱讀一遍，減少語法錯誤，不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。
2.例文點評：這是一篇優秀的例文，完整地給出相關緩解考試壓力的建議，避免出現累贅。例文結構清晰，行文連貫，恰當地運用了副詞和連詞等用以過渡，增強了整篇文章的邏輯關系。
3.高分亮點：詞組：heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；is
good
for等；
句型：
I
think
proper
pressure
is
normal,
because
exams
are
important
for
us.
/Let
me
tell
you
about
my
advice./For
example,
I
like
to
listen
to
music
because
some
soft
music
can
help
us
relax.
/If
you
think
these
suggestions
is
good
for
you
,you
can
have
a
try
./I
hope
my
suggestions
can
help
you.
【點睛】
書面表達：
首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，例如heard
from；proper
pressure；my
advice；relax
yourself；soft
music；exercise
regularly；believe
in
ourselves；等；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩，自然流暢，如however；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。
（五）
今年3月5號學雷鋒紀念日，你校組織志愿者去夕陽紅敬老院開展“學雷鋒，送溫暖”活動。假如你是學生張華，請將活動情況介紹給你的美國筆友Ben，分享這次美好的經歷。
活動時間
3月5日
活動地點
夕陽紅敬老院（Xiyanghong
Nursing
Home)
參加人員
學校志愿者活動內容
1.
送鮮花和水果
2.幫助打掃衛生
3.……
活動感想
1.關愛和尊重老人2.
……..要求：
(1)表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
(2)必須包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求適當發揮；
(3)詞數：100左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；
(4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear
Ben,
Thank
you
for
your
last
email.
Let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
March
5.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
I＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
Best
wishes,
Zhang
Hua
【滿分范文】
Dear
Ben,
Thank
you
for
your
last
email.
Let
me
tell
you
what
we
did
in
our
school
on
March
5.
As
soon
as
we
got
to
Xiyanghong
Nursing
Home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.
The
elderly
people
were
very
excited
to
see
us.
We
brought
some
flowers
and
fruits
to
them.
Then,
we
cleaned
the
windows
and
swept
the
floor
for
them.
After
that,
some
of
us
took
a
walk
with
them,
chatted
with
each
other
and
some
of
us
played
chess
with
them.
When
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
I
promise
to
myself
that
I
will
go
to
see
them
whenever
I＇m
free.
We
should
care
for
the
elderly
people
and
respect
them.
I＇d
like
to
hear
about
volunteering
work
in
your
school.
Best
wishes,
Zhang
Hua
【解析】
1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文，你校組織志愿者去夕陽紅敬老院開展“學雷鋒，送溫暖”活動。假如你是學生張華，請將活動情況介紹給你的美國筆友Ben，分享這次美好的經歷。。首先要認真審題，根據提示內容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作。
2.例文點評：本文時態為一般過去時態，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點，內容完整，表述準確，語言的表述符合語法的結構，造句符合英語的表達習慣。
3.高分亮點：
短語：as
soon
as
；
get
to；give
sb.
a
warm
welcome；bring
sth.
to
sb.；take
a
walk
with
sb.；be
thankful
for…
句型：As
soon
as
we
got
to
Xiyanghong
Nursing
Home,
people
there
gave
us
a
warm
welcome.；When
it
was
time
for
us
volunteers
to
leave,
they
were
thankful
for
our
kindness
and
they
felt
somewhat
sad.
（六）
寒假即將來臨，你一定有你的寒假計劃吧？你校英語俱樂部開展了以“My
plan
for
the
winter
holiday”為主題的征文活動，請根據下面的思維導圖，寫一篇英語短文向英語俱樂部投稿。
寒假計劃
學習
1.功課（作業、復習）
2.閱讀（類型、原因）
興趣
1.運動
2.藝術
其他
1.旅游
2.要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括…中所有要點內容，并適當發揮；
3）詞數：100
詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
My
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
Winter
holiday
is
coming.
Here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】
My
plan
for
the
winter
holiday
Winter
holiday
is
coming.
Here
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
First,
I’ll
keep
on
doing
some
sports
such
as
playing
Ping-Pong
and
running.
I
think
they
are
good
for
my
health.
Next,
I
hope
to
relax
by
reading
some
books
and
watching
TV.
What’s
more,
I
must
finish
the
exercises
left
by
teachers,
because
I
will
go
to
see
my
grandparents
with
mom
and
dad.
I
miss
them
very
much.
So
do
they.
Finally,
I
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
Probably
I’ll
go
to
Hainan.
I
want
to
enjoy
the
beautiful
beaches
there.
This
is
my
plan
for
the
winter
holiday.
I’m
looking
forward
to
my
happy
winter
holiday!
【解析】
題干解讀：本題列出了詳細的思維導圖，可以根據這篇思維導圖來完成自己的文章，可以按照思維導圖的形式來分段，本文是寫自己的寒假計劃，所以時態注意要用將來時。
例文點評：本文按照自己的順序詳細地描述了自己的寒假計劃，過渡詞用的很好，并且時態也是根據作者所需作出了適當的變化，條理清晰，文筆流暢。
高分亮點：
短語：keep
on；good
for；What’s
more；would
like
to
句型：I
miss
them
very
much.
So
do
they.
Finally,
I
would
like
to
travel
somewhere
interesting
with
my
parents.
（七）
Write
at
least
60
words
on
the
topic“Weekend
or
Not？“according
to
the
information
given．（閱讀以下內容，并以
“這是湯姆的周末嗎？“為題寫一篇不少于
60
個詞的短文，標點符號不占格．）
如今，很多孩子在父母的安排下沒有了自己的周末，如下圖中的
Tom，請分析圖中的這種現象并談談你的看法，以
Weekend
or
Not？為題寫一篇不少于
60
個詞的英語短文，向
Parents
雜志投稿，讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章能有所啟發．要求：
1．簡單描述“Tom“的周末狀態、提出你的具體想法并給出建議；
2．短文中不得出現“Tom“以外的人名或任何校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分．
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】
Weekend
or
Not？
Tom
has
to
attend
lots
of
classes
at
weekends．
He
has
little
time
for
his
favorite
sport﹣soccer．
Still，
his
parents
are
pushing
him
to
do
more
math
exercises，
which
worries
him
a
lot．（要點一，湯姆的周末）Nowadays，
many
students
are
under
much
pressure
like
Tom．
Their
parents
believe
it
is
necessary
for
them
to
make
full
use
of
the
weekends
and
learn
as
much
as
possible（高分句型一）．
As
a
result，
some
students
are
stressed
out
and
therefore
lose
interest
in
learning
anything．（高分句型二）
What
is
worse，they
may
not
be
able
to
learn
to
manage
their
own
life．（要點二，大多數孩子的周末）
I
do
hope
all
the
children
can
have
the
freedom
to
choose
what
they
like
to
do
and
enjoy
their
weekends．
（要點三，自己的觀點）
（八）
為抗擊新型冠狀病毒（NCP），此次寒假我們必須呆在家里，假如你是Alice，作為九年級1班的班長，請給你班的同學們寫一封信．建議他們不要煩躁，可以在家做一些放松的活動來保證身心健康，并針對如何在上網課期間，取得更大進步給予建議．
寫作要點：
1．
不要焦慮，我們將盡快重返校園．
2．
可以在家進行放松的活動：
（1）閱讀，聽音樂，下棋．
（2）室內活動（如做眼保健操）．
3．
針對如何在上網課期間，取得更大進步，給予同學們建議．
寫作要求：
（1）不得使用真實的姓名和學校名．
（2）可適當加入細節，使內容充實，行文連貫．
（3）字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰．
（4）至少80詞．
Dear
classmates，
How
is
everything
going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
Best
wishes!
Yours，
Alice
【滿分范文】
Dear
classmates，
How
is
everything
going？
Don＇t
worry．
It＇s
a
special
winter
holiday
because
of
NCP．
Everyone
must
stay
at
home
to
prevent
it．We
will
go
back
to
school
as
soon
as
possible．（不要焦慮，我們將盡快重返校園）
I
think
reading，
listening
to
music
or
playing
chess
can
make
you
relax
if
you
feel
depressed
and
bored．
【高分句型一】Spending
some
time
doing
indoor
exercise
is
necessary，
such
as
doing
eye
exercises．（在家進行放松的活動）
In
the
special
period，
online
teaching
is
carried
out
every
day．
You
are
supposed
to
be
on
time
on
weekdays．
It
is
necessary
for
you
to
have
a
quiet
learning
environment．【高分句型二】Clean
up
any
distraction
on
the
table
before
class．
During
the
class，
write
down
the
key
points
of
the
knowledge
and
the
difficult
parts
that
you
don＇t
understand．
You
can
ask
for
advice
through
Wechat，
QQ
or
other
ways
as
soon
as
possible．
While
studying
hard，
don＇t
forget
to
exercise．
Stretching
your
body
is
also
useful．（針對如何在上網課期間，取得更大進步，給予同學們建議）
We
believe
winter
will
finally
pass，
and
spring
is
sure
to
come．
I＇m
looking
forward
to
seeing
you
soon．
Best
wishes!
Yours，
Alice
（九）
近日，某校開展了“志愿者日“的活動，鼓勵同學們利用周末走出校園，盡自己所能為所在的社區做一些力所能及的事情。并隨機給100名同學發放了調查問卷，下圖是調查問卷的統計結果。
go
to
old
people
home
visit
sick
children
in
the
hospital
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community
請你用兩段話寫一篇短文，第一段簡要說明圖表內容，第二段從圖表中選出符合你實際的一項，結合自己的經歷，談談你的志愿者日是如何度過的。
要求：1．詞數不少于80詞；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
Volunteer
Day
on
weekends．
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________
【滿分范文】
Recently,
a
survey
was
done
among
100
students
in
a
school
about
how
students
spent
the
Volunteer
Day
on
weekends．
Here
is
the
result．
25%
of
the
students
chose
to
help
clean
up
the
parks
in
the
community．
30%
of
the
students
spent
their
weekends
visiting
sick
children
in
the
hospital．
（高分句型一）Nearly
half
of
the
students
went
to
old
people’s
home
to
visit
the
old
people
there．（簡要說明圖標內容）
Last
Sunday，
I
went
to
old
people’s
home
with
my
friends
Lucy
and
Sam．
We
cleaned
the
rooms
for
the
old
people
and
told
them
many
interesting
things
in
our
school．
They
told
us
stories
about
the
past
and
how
things
used
to
be．
Lucy
and
I
are
both
good
at
singing，
so
we
sang
for
them．
They
were
so
happy
and
sang
along
with
us．
An
old
grandpa
also
taught
us
how
to
play
kung
fu．（高分句型二）
Sam
likes
telling
jokes
and
his
jokes
made
the
old
people
laugh
happily．
It
was
a
really
meaningful
Sunday．（結合自己去敬老院的經歷）
In
a
word，
volunteering
is
really
a
great
experience
for
us．
We
can
get
such
a
strong
feeling
of
satisfaction
from
helping
others．（總結與心得）
（十）
某校正在開展“走進新時代，爭當合格中學生“的演講比賽，請以“We
act，we
improve“為主題，寫一篇演講稿，談談中學生除了學習課本知識之外，還應該做些什么？
演講稿應包括以下內容：
（1）學會自立，誠實友善，舉止文明；
（2）培養習慣，發展興趣，不斷創新；
（3）關心他人，和諧相處，懂得感恩；
（4）……
要求：（1）要點齊全，并適當發揮；
（2）文中不得出現真實的姓名與校名；
（3）卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當加
2﹣3
分；
（4）詞數：90
詞左右．開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數．
Ladies
and
gentlemen，
We
have
entered
a
new
area．As
students，______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】
Ladies
and
gentlemen，
We
have
entered
a
new
area．
As
students，
it’s
our
duty
to
study
hard．
But
to
be
a
qualified
middle
school
student，
I
think
we
have
a
lot
of
things
to
do．（點題）
First，
we
should
learn
to
be
independent
and
honest．
We’re
supposed
to
be
friendly
to
others
and
behave
politely
in
public．【高分句型一】
Second，
we
should
have
good
habits．
Habits
play
an
important
role
in
our
life．
We’d
better
develop
our
interests
and
the
ability
to
create．
【高分句型二】Third，
we
should
care
more
about
others
and
be
thankful
to
all
the
people
who
have
helped
us．
Value
the
time
we
spend
with
our
family
and
friends
in
our
daily
life．
Last
but
not
least，
I
think
we
should
exercise
more
to
keep
healthy．（應該做什么）
In
a
word，
the
more
we
act，
the
better
we
will
improve．（總結全文）
（十一）
中學生課后活動豐富多彩，你最喜歡的是什么，請選擇其中一項，根據以下提示，以“An
after-school
activity“為題，寫一篇
80
詞左右的短文，與同學們分享。
要點：1．你最喜歡的課后活動是什么，及課后活動的時間、地點；
2．談談其給你帶來的益處；
3．你的建議。
要求：1．內容必須包括所給要點，可適當發揮，增加細節，以使行文連貫。
2．語篇完整，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范。
3．文中不能出現人名、校名或地名，否則不予評分。
An
after-school
activity
There
are
many
after-school
activities．
I
like
_______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【滿分范文】
An
after-school
activity
Students
in
middle
schools
have
many
kinds
of
after﹣school
activities．Maybe
they
do
sports，go
hiking，watch
TV
or
surf
on
the
Internet．Even
some
students
put
all
their
free
time
into
studying
the
textbook
knowledge．But
my
favorite
after﹣school
activity
is
collecting
stamps．Let
me
tell
you
the
reason．（我最喜歡的課外活動）
First，I
can
learn
a
lot
from
the
stamps．There
are
many
Chinese
cultures
in
the
stamps【高分句型一】．When
I
collect
them，I
can
learn
more
about
my
motherland【高分句型二】．Second，I
can
make
more
friends．Many
students
love
collecting
stamps．Because
of
the
same
hobbies
and
interests，we
can
talk
and
do
the
same
things．Then
we
can
be
good
friends．（帶來的益處）
In
a
word，after-school
activities
can
make
us
relax．You
can
take
up
a
hobby
that
you
like．
Why
not
join
in
it？（建議）
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