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  • 時間:2020-07-06
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    素質教育篇
    (一)
    根據中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50詞的文段寫作。文中已給出內容不計入總詞數。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。
    假如你是李華,你們學校正在開展“安全月”宣傳活動,倡議大家制作關于安全教育的主題海報,你們班交換生Peter給你發郵件詢問相關事情。請用英語回復一封郵件,告訴他海報上交的時間,并分享你設計海報的一些想法。
    提示詞語:design,safety
    rule,careful,protect,picture
    提示問題:When
    should
    you
    hand
    in
    the
    poster?What
    would
    you
    like
    to
    share
    with
    Peter
    about
    designing
    the
    poster?
    Dear
    Peter,
    I'm
    glad
    to
    receive
    your
    email
    ______________________________________________________________________________________
    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    If
    there
    is
    anything
    more
    that
    I
    can
    help
    with,
    please
    let
    me
    know.
    Yours,
    Li
    Hua
    【寫作思路】
    這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給Peter寫一封郵件,告訴他關于制作關于安全教育的主題海報的相關事宜。由題目中給出的提示問題可知,短文中應包括以下內容:首先告訴Peter海報上交的時間;然后和他分享一些設計海報的想法。第二個內容應該是短文的主體。題目中并沒有規定具體的寫作內容,學生們應聯系自己的實際生活,展開合理的想象,將這些內容補充完整后,用正確的英語表達出來,這是寫作中的一個難點。短文應以一般現在時為主、第一、二人稱來敘述。寫作時應注意:首先要合理安排短文內容,敘述應有層次、有條理?梢允褂靡恍┍硎鞠群箜樞虻脑~或短語,如First,
    Second,
    Last
    but
    not
    least等等。題目中給出的提示詞應該在短文中用上。其次應注意文章的表達,英語句式的結構與漢語是不同的,因此不能根據漢語思維逐詞翻譯,應該從句式的整體考慮,先確定主干結構,然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次,應注意使用一些高級詞匯、短語以及復合句、非謂語動詞等復雜結構。同時語句之間使用恰當的連接成分,使文意上下連貫,表達流暢。
    【滿分范文】
    Dear
    Peter,
    I'm
    glad
    to
    receive
    your
    email.
    As
    it
    is
    required,you
    are
    supposed
    to
    hand
    in
    the
    poster
    before
    next
    Friday.
    Being
    your
    close
    friend,I
    am
    extremely
    willing
    to
    share
    some
    ideas
    about
    designing
    the
    poster
    with
    you.
    First
    and
    foremost,the
    basic
    safety
    rules
    are
    of
    great
    importance,which
    should
    be
    included
    in
    your
    poster.
    In
    the
    second
    place,following
    the
    safety
    rules
    is
    so
    meaningful
    and
    crucial
    that
    you
    had
    better
    remind
    your
    readers
    of
    its
    significance
    and
    advise
    them
    to
    be
    careful
    both
    in
    and
    out
    of
    school.
    Last
    but
    by
    no
    means
    least,if
    I
    were
    you,I
    would
    add
    a
    few
    suggestions
    about
    safety
    awareness,considering
    that
    better
    safe
    than
    sorry.
    In
    addition,it
    is
    a
    good
    idea
    for
    you
    to
    draw
    a
    few
    pictures
    on
    your
    poster
    so
    as
    to
    make
    it
    more
    lively
    and
    acceptable.
    If
    there
    is
    anything
    more
    that
    I
    can
    help
    with,
    please
    let
    me
    know.
    Yours,
    Li
    Hua
    【名師點評】
    這是一篇優秀的作文,短文作者根據題目要求,給Peter寫郵件,告訴他制作主題海報的一些事情。短文有以下幾個優點:首先文章內容完整,結構清晰,符合題目要求。除題目中給出的開頭和結尾,短文主要包括兩個內容:第一段用一句話告訴Peter上交海報的時間;文章的中心和重點是放在了第二段上,這一段中作者和Peter分享了一些制作海報的想法。主要從四個方面進行闡述,內容非常詳實,并使用了First
    and
    foremost,
    In
    the
    second
    place,
    Last
    but
    by
    no
    means
    least,
    In
    addition等短語,分清了這一段的層次,敘述非常有條理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態和人稱,語法規范,用詞準確,并使用了較復雜的句式結構,表現了作者較強的語言運用能力。短文中較好的句型有:Being
    your
    close
    friend,I
    am
    extremely
    willing
    to
    share
    some
    ideas
    about
    designing
    the
    poster
    with
    you.、In
    the
    second
    place,following
    the
    safety
    rules
    is
    so
    meaningful
    and
    crucial
    that
    you
    had
    better
    remind
    your
    readers
    of
    its
    significance
    and
    advise
    them
    to
    be
    careful
    both
    in
    and
    out
    of
    school、In
    addition,it
    is
    a
    good
    idea
    for
    you
    to
    draw
    a
    few
    pictures
    on
    your
    poster
    so
    as
    to
    make
    it
    more
    lively
    and
    acceptable.等。

    (二)
    日前某校進行了題為“有壓力向誰說”的問卷調查(結果如圖),請你根據要求寫一篇英語短文參加該校的征文活動。向老師傾訴
    向朋友傾訴
    向家長傾訴
    不跟任何人說
    內容包括:1.
    簡要描述調查結果;
    2.
    你喜歡向誰傾訴壓力?為什么?
    3.
    提出2條緩解壓力的建議。
    要求:1.
    文章必須包括所給要點,但不要逐條翻譯,可進行適當拓展;
    2.
    書寫規范,80—100詞,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;
    3.
    文中不得出現真實校名、人名。
    When
    teens
    have
    stress,
    they
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    different
    people.
    Here
    are
    the
    results
    about
    our
    survey.
    ______________________________________________________________________
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【滿分范文】
    When
    teens
    have
    stress,
    they
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    different
    people.
    Here
    are
    the
    results
    about
    our
    survey.
    Thirty-five
    percent
    of
    students
    will
    talk
    about
    their
    stress
    to
    their
    teachers,
    forty
    percent
    of
    students
    will
    talk
    to
    their
    friends,
    only
    fifteen
    percent
    of
    students
    talk
    to
    their
    parents
    but
    only
    ten
    percent
    of
    students
    talk
    to
    nobody.
    For
    me,
    I
    like
    to
    tell
    my
    friends
    about
    the
    pressure,
    because
    we
    are
    all
    the
    same
    age,
    they
    sometimes
    feel
    the
    same
    as
    us
    .and
    we
    can
    communicate
    with
    and
    understand
    each
    other
    easily.
    But
    as
    a
    student,
    we
    should
    learn
    to
    relieve
    stress.
    First
    of
    all,
    we
    should
    properly
    face
    the
    pressure.?Stress
    is
    everywhere
    in
    our
    daily
    life,
    so
    we
    can't
    be
    afraid
    of
    them
    and
    try
    our
    best
    to
    deal
    with
    them.
    Secondly,
    we
    can
    listen
    to
    light
    music
    or
    do
    some
    proper
    sports,
    which
    can
    let
    us
    relax.
    Finally,
    believe
    in
    yourself.
    We
    should
    believe
    in
    ourselves.
    We
    can
    deal
    with
    any
    trouble
    with
    the
    help
    of
    ourselves
    or
    others.
    Stress
    is
    everywhere
    and
    we
    must
    face
    the
    pressure
    properly.
    【解析】
    1.
    題干解讀:本篇文章屬于話題性+圖表型作文,根據圖表內容說明不同的人對壓力的訴說對象不同的情況,文中會較多的使用數字說明,做一個對比,然后闡述自己的壓力喜歡對誰說以及原因,并且提出該如何緩解壓力的幾條建議。建議可以從自身實際出發,自己平時是如何緩解壓力的可以一起分享。
    2.
    例文點評:文章采取三段式,第一段對圖表內容進行闡述,以及闡述自己喜歡向誰訴說壓力和為什么?第二段主要給出一些緩解壓力的建議,第三段做一個總結,概括壓力無處不在,但是要正視壓力。文章結構完整。段落銜接很好,語言表達清晰準確,語句簡單易懂。
    3.
    高分亮點:
    短語:talk
    about;the
    same
    as;communicate
    with;deal
    with;be
    afraid
    of。
    句型:so引導的并列句;because引導的原因狀語從句;
    (三)
    xxxx呼吁:“共同呵護好孩子的眼睛,讓他們擁有一個光明的未來”,為此,學校
    廣播站邀請你寫一篇關于保護視力的倡議書,請根據以下信息寫一篇文章:


    1.
    越來越多的孩子帶上了眼鏡;2.
    超過
    70%的初中生近視;3.
    父母和老師為此擔憂;


    1.
    學習;2.
    電子產品;3.
    缺少睡眠;


    1.
    每天至少做兩次眼保健操;
    2.
    多進行戶外運動;
    3.
    健康飲食;
    ……
    視力差:have
    poor
    eyesight
    要求:
    1.
    所寫內容必須包括以上表格提供的所有信息,并適當發揮;
    2.
    文章不少于
    90
    詞,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;
    3.
    語意通順,意思連貫,條理清楚,書寫規范;
    4.
    文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名等信息。
    Poor
    eyesight
    is
    a
    serious
    problem
    among
    the
    youth
    of
    our
    country.
    It’s
    amazing
    that
    the
    situation
    is
    going
    from
    bad
    to
    worse.
    It
    is
    time
    that
    we
    take
    the
    problem
    seriously.

    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【滿分范文】
    Poor
    eyesight
    is
    a
    serious
    problem
    among
    the
    youth
    of
    our
    country.
    It’s
    amazing
    that
    the
    situation
    is
    going
    from
    bad
    to
    worse.
    It
    is
    time
    that
    we
    take
    the
    problem
    seriously.
    At
    present,
    more
    and
    more
    students
    wear
    glasses,
    over
    70
    %
    of
    the
    middle
    school
    students
    have
    poor
    eyesight.
    Both
    parents
    and
    teachers
    are
    worried
    about
    it.

    Here
    are
    some
    main
    causes.
    First,
    some
    students
    spend
    too
    much
    time
    reading
    or
    doing
    their
    homework
    without
    a
    rest.
    Second,
    some
    students
    even
    like
    to
    watch
    TV
    or
    use
    computers
    for
    a
    long
    time.Third,
    some
    students
    may
    not
    have
    enough
    sleep.

    In
    order
    to
    have
    good
    eyesight,
    we
    should
    do
    eye
    exercises
    at
    least
    twice
    a
    day.
    We
    can
    also
    try
    to
    do
    more
    sports
    in
    our
    spare
    time.
    We
    had
    better
    eat
    healthy
    food.
    Of
    course,
    it
    is
    important
    to
    have
    a
    good
    habit
    of
    using
    our
    eyes.
    For
    example,
    we
    shouldn’t
    read
    in
    the
    sun
    or
    in
    bed.

    I
    think
    all
    of
    us
    should
    understand
    the
    importance
    of
    protecting
    eyes
    and
    try
    our
    best
    to
    protect
    them.
    【解析】
    題干分析:這是一篇要求寫一篇關于保護視力的倡議書,響應xxxx呼吁:“共同呵護好孩子的眼睛,讓他們擁有一個光明的未來”,觀察提示表格,寫作內容要包括目前的現在,還有產生這些問題的原因,已經提出的相關建議。
    例文點評:這是一篇優秀的例文,很好的完成了試題規定的任務,語言表達符合英語習慣,準確的運用的時態,例文中運用的是一般現在時。例文第一段首先提出了目前我國青少年視力不良的社會問題;第二段詳細的介紹了產生問題的三點原因;第三段提出有效的建議,號召保護視力。例文還使用了一些亮點詞句,增強邏輯關系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準確,句子通順,行文連貫。
    高分亮點:
    短語:At
    present目前;more
    and
    more越來越多;be
    worried
    about擔心;too
    much太多;like
    to
    do
    sth喜歡做某事;In
    order
    to
    sth為了做某事;at
    least至少;try
    one’s
    best
    to
    do
    sth盡某人最大努力做某事;eye
    exercises眼保健操;in
    one’s
    spare
    time在某人空閑時間。
    句型:(1)First,
    some
    students
    spend
    too
    much
    time
    reading
    or
    doing
    their
    homework
    without
    a
    rest.
    Sb.
    spend
    time
    (in)
    doing
    sth某人花費時間做某事;(2)Of
    course,
    it
    is
    important
    to
    have
    a
    good
    habit
    of
    using
    our
    eyes.
    It
    is
    +adj.
    (for
    sb.)
    to
    do
    sth(對某人來說)做某事時怎樣的。
    (四)

    假如你是李華,你的表妹Lily面對即將到來的期末考試,壓力很大,這幾天甚至出現了失眠的狀況,請你給她寫一封電子郵件,幫助她盡快調整好狀態迎接考試。
    提示詞:
    relaxed;
    music;
    exercise;
    believe
    in
    要求:
    1.
    參考提示詞,可適當發揮
    2.
    語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;
    3.
    文中不得出現任何真實信息(姓名、校名、地名等)
    4.
    詞數:不少于70詞。(開頭和結尾已給出,但不計入總詞數。)
    Dear
    Lily,

    __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Yours,Li
    Hua
    【滿分范文】
    Dear
    Lily,
    I'm
    sorry
    that
    I
    heard
    from
    you.
    I
    think
    proper
    pressure
    is
    normal,
    because
    exams
    are
    important
    for
    us.
    This
    happened
    to
    me.
    Let
    me
    tell
    you
    about
    my
    advice.
    You
    can
    do
    something
    you
    like
    to
    relax
    yourself.
    For
    example,
    I
    like
    to
    listen
    to
    music
    because
    some
    soft
    music
    can
    help
    us
    relax.
    I
    exercise
    regularly
    to
    increase
    my
    ability
    to
    work
    under
    pressure.
    We
    have
    to
    learn
    to
    believe
    in
    ourselves.
    If
    you
    think
    these
    suggestions
    is
    good
    for
    you
    ,you
    can
    have
    a
    try.
    I
    hope
    my
    suggestions
    can
    help
    you.
    Yours,Li
    Hua
    【解析】
    1.題干解讀:該題目屬于信件寫作,要求根據來信寫回信,信件內容應該完整地給出相關建議,幫助她盡快調整好狀態迎接考試。適當使用副詞和連詞等增加亮點。寫好時,再閱讀一遍,減少語法錯誤,不要犯單詞拼寫上的錯誤。
    2.例文點評:這是一篇優秀的例文,完整地給出相關緩解考試壓力的建議,避免出現累贅。例文結構清晰,行文連貫,恰當地運用了副詞和連詞等用以過渡,增強了整篇文章的邏輯關系。
    3.高分亮點:詞組:heard
    from;proper
    pressure;my
    advice;relax
    yourself;soft
    music;exercise
    regularly;believe
    in
    ourselves;is
    good
    for等;
    句型:
    I
    think
    proper
    pressure
    is
    normal,
    because
    exams
    are
    important
    for
    us.
    /Let
    me
    tell
    you
    about
    my
    advice./For
    example,
    I
    like
    to
    listen
    to
    music
    because
    some
    soft
    music
    can
    help
    us
    relax.
    /If
    you
    think
    these
    suggestions
    is
    good
    for
    you
    ,you
    can
    have
    a
    try
    ./I
    hope
    my
    suggestions
    can
    help
    you.
    【點睛】
    書面表達:
    首先認真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達,例如heard
    from;proper
    pressure;my
    advice;relax
    yourself;soft
    music;exercise
    regularly;believe
    in
    ourselves;等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩,自然流暢,如however;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等,還要檢查語法結構是否合理,有無重復、啰嗦的語言,大小寫是否正確,詞數是否符合要求等。
    (五)
    今年3月5號學雷鋒紀念日,你校組織志愿者去夕陽紅敬老院開展“學雷鋒,送溫暖”活動。假如你是學生張華,請將活動情況介紹給你的美國筆友Ben,分享這次美好的經歷。
    活動時間
    3月5日
    活動地點
    夕陽紅敬老院(Xiyanghong
    Nursing
    Home)
    參加人員
    學校志愿者活動內容
    1.
    送鮮花和水果

    2.幫助打掃衛生
    3.……
    活動感想
    1.關愛和尊重老人2.
    ……..要求:
    (1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;
    (2)必須包括表格中的所有信息,并按要求適當發揮;
    (3)詞數:100左右(開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數);
    (4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
    Dear
    Ben,
    Thank
    you
    for
    your
    last
    email.
    Let
    me
    tell
    you
    what
    we
    did
    in
    our
    school
    on
    March
    5.
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________
    I'd
    like
    to
    hear
    about
    volunteering
    work
    in
    your
    school.
    Best
    wishes,
    Zhang
    Hua
    【滿分范文】
    Dear
    Ben,
    Thank
    you
    for
    your
    last
    email.
    Let
    me
    tell
    you
    what
    we
    did
    in
    our
    school
    on
    March
    5.
    As
    soon
    as
    we
    got
    to
    Xiyanghong
    Nursing
    Home,
    people
    there
    gave
    us
    a
    warm
    welcome.
    The
    elderly
    people
    were
    very
    excited
    to
    see
    us.
    We
    brought
    some
    flowers
    and
    fruits
    to
    them.
    Then,
    we
    cleaned
    the
    windows
    and
    swept
    the
    floor
    for
    them.
    After
    that,
    some
    of
    us
    took
    a
    walk
    with
    them,
    chatted
    with
    each
    other
    and
    some
    of
    us
    played
    chess
    with
    them.
    When
    it
    was
    time
    for
    us
    volunteers
    to
    leave,
    they
    were
    thankful
    for
    our
    kindness
    and
    they
    felt
    somewhat
    sad.
    I
    promise
    to
    myself
    that
    I
    will
    go
    to
    see
    them
    whenever
    I'm
    free.
    We
    should
    care
    for
    the
    elderly
    people
    and
    respect
    them.
    I'd
    like
    to
    hear
    about
    volunteering
    work
    in
    your
    school.
    Best
    wishes,
    Zhang
    Hua
    【解析】
    1.題干解讀:本文是一篇書信作文,你校組織志愿者去夕陽紅敬老院開展“學雷鋒,送溫暖”活動。假如你是學生張華,請將活動情況介紹給你的美國筆友Ben,分享這次美好的經歷。。首先要認真審題,根據提示內容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。
    2.例文點評:本文時態為一般過去時態,人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點,內容完整,表述準確,語言的表述符合語法的結構,造句符合英語的表達習慣。
    3.高分亮點:
    短語:as
    soon
    as
    ;
    get
    to;give
    sb.
    a
    warm
    welcome;bring
    sth.
    to
    sb.;take
    a
    walk
    with
    sb.;be
    thankful
    for…
    句型:As
    soon
    as
    we
    got
    to
    Xiyanghong
    Nursing
    Home,
    people
    there
    gave
    us
    a
    warm
    welcome.;When
    it
    was
    time
    for
    us
    volunteers
    to
    leave,
    they
    were
    thankful
    for
    our
    kindness
    and
    they
    felt
    somewhat
    sad.
    (六)
    寒假即將來臨,你一定有你的寒假計劃吧?你校英語俱樂部開展了以“My
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday”為主題的征文活動,請根據下面的思維導圖,寫一篇英語短文向英語俱樂部投稿。

    寒假計劃
    學習
    1.功課(作業、復習)
    2.閱讀(類型、原因)
    興趣
    1.運動
    2.藝術
    其他
    1.旅游
    2.要求:1)表達清楚,語法正確,上下文連貫;
    2)必須包括…中所有要點內容,并適當發揮;
    3)詞數:100
    詞左右(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數);
    4)不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。
    My
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday
    Winter
    holiday
    is
    coming.
    Here
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】
    My
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday
    Winter
    holiday
    is
    coming.
    Here
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    First,
    I’ll
    keep
    on
    doing
    some
    sports
    such
    as
    playing
    Ping-Pong
    and
    running.
    I
    think
    they
    are
    good
    for
    my
    health.
    Next,
    I
    hope
    to
    relax
    by
    reading
    some
    books
    and
    watching
    TV.
    What’s
    more,
    I
    must
    finish
    the
    exercises
    left
    by
    teachers,
    because
    I
    will
    go
    to
    see
    my
    grandparents
    with
    mom
    and
    dad.
    I
    miss
    them
    very
    much.
    So
    do
    they.
    Finally,
    I
    would
    like
    to
    travel
    somewhere
    interesting
    with
    my
    parents.
    Probably
    I’ll
    go
    to
    Hainan.
    I
    want
    to
    enjoy
    the
    beautiful
    beaches
    there.
    This
    is
    my
    plan
    for
    the
    winter
    holiday.
    I’m
    looking
    forward
    to
    my
    happy
    winter
    holiday!
    【解析】
    題干解讀:本題列出了詳細的思維導圖,可以根據這篇思維導圖來完成自己的文章,可以按照思維導圖的形式來分段,本文是寫自己的寒假計劃,所以時態注意要用將來時。
    例文點評:本文按照自己的順序詳細地描述了自己的寒假計劃,過渡詞用的很好,并且時態也是根據作者所需作出了適當的變化,條理清晰,文筆流暢。
    高分亮點:
    短語:keep
    on;good
    for;What’s
    more;would
    like
    to
    句型:I
    miss
    them
    very
    much.
    So
    do
    they.
    Finally,
    I
    would
    like
    to
    travel
    somewhere
    interesting
    with
    my
    parents.
    (七)
    Write
    at
    least
    60
    words
    on
    the
    topic“Weekend
    or
    Not?“according
    to
    the
    information
    given.(閱讀以下內容,并以
    “這是湯姆的周末嗎?“為題寫一篇不少于
    60
    個詞的短文,標點符號不占格.)
    如今,很多孩子在父母的安排下沒有了自己的周末,如下圖中的
    Tom,請分析圖中的這種現象并談談你的看法,以
    Weekend
    or
    Not?為題寫一篇不少于
    60
    個詞的英語短文,向
    Parents
    雜志投稿,讓父母們通過閱讀你的文章能有所啟發.要求:
    1.簡單描述“Tom“的周末狀態、提出你的具體想法并給出建議;
    2.短文中不得出現“Tom“以外的人名或任何校名及其他相關信息,否則不予評分.
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【滿分范文】
    Weekend
    or
    Not?
    Tom
    has
    to
    attend
    lots
    of
    classes
    at
    weekends.
    He
    has
    little
    time
    for
    his
    favorite
    sport﹣soccer.
    Still,
    his
    parents
    are
    pushing
    him
    to
    do
    more
    math
    exercises,
    which
    worries
    him
    a
    lot.(要點一,湯姆的周末)Nowadays,
    many
    students
    are
    under
    much
    pressure
    like
    Tom.
    Their
    parents
    believe
    it
    is
    necessary
    for
    them
    to
    make
    full
    use
    of
    the
    weekends
    and
    learn
    as
    much
    as
    possible(高分句型一).

    As
    a
    result,
    some
    students
    are
    stressed
    out
    and
    therefore
    lose
    interest
    in
    learning
    anything.(高分句型二)
    What
    is
    worse,they
    may
    not
    be
    able
    to
    learn
    to
    manage
    their
    own
    life.(要點二,大多數孩子的周末)
    I
    do
    hope
    all
    the
    children
    can
    have
    the
    freedom
    to
    choose
    what
    they
    like
    to
    do
    and
    enjoy
    their
    weekends.
    (要點三,自己的觀點)
    (八)
    為抗擊新型冠狀病毒(NCP),此次寒假我們必須呆在家里,假如你是Alice,作為九年級1班的班長,請給你班的同學們寫一封信.建議他們不要煩躁,可以在家做一些放松的活動來保證身心健康,并針對如何在上網課期間,取得更大進步給予建議.
    寫作要點:
    1.
    不要焦慮,我們將盡快重返校園.
    2.
    可以在家進行放松的活動:
    (1)閱讀,聽音樂,下棋.
    (2)室內活動(如做眼保健操).
    3.
    針對如何在上網課期間,取得更大進步,給予同學們建議.
    寫作要求:
    (1)不得使用真實的姓名和學校名.
    (2)可適當加入細節,使內容充實,行文連貫.
    (3)字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰.
    (4)至少80詞.
    Dear
    classmates,
    How
    is
    everything
    going?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________________________________________________________________

    Best
    wishes!
    Yours,
    Alice
    【滿分范文】
    Dear
    classmates,
    How
    is
    everything
    going?
    Don't
    worry.
    It's
    a
    special
    winter
    holiday
    because
    of
    NCP.
    Everyone
    must
    stay
    at
    home
    to
    prevent
    it.We
    will
    go
    back
    to
    school
    as
    soon
    as
    possible.(不要焦慮,我們將盡快重返校園)
    I
    think
    reading,
    listening
    to
    music
    or
    playing
    chess
    can
    make
    you
    relax
    if
    you
    feel
    depressed
    and
    bored.
    【高分句型一】Spending
    some
    time
    doing
    indoor
    exercise
    is
    necessary,
    such
    as
    doing
    eye
    exercises.(在家進行放松的活動)
    In
    the
    special
    period,
    online
    teaching
    is
    carried
    out
    every
    day.
    You
    are
    supposed
    to
    be
    on
    time
    on
    weekdays.
    It
    is
    necessary
    for
    you
    to
    have
    a
    quiet
    learning
    environment.【高分句型二】Clean
    up
    any
    distraction
    on
    the
    table
    before
    class.
    During
    the
    class,
    write
    down
    the
    key
    points
    of
    the
    knowledge
    and
    the
    difficult
    parts
    that
    you
    don't
    understand.
    You
    can
    ask
    for
    advice
    through
    Wechat,
    QQ
    or
    other
    ways
    as
    soon
    as
    possible.
    While
    studying
    hard,
    don't
    forget
    to
    exercise.
    Stretching
    your
    body
    is
    also
    useful.(針對如何在上網課期間,取得更大進步,給予同學們建議)
    We
    believe
    winter
    will
    finally
    pass,
    and
    spring
    is
    sure
    to
    come.
    I'm
    looking
    forward
    to
    seeing
    you
    soon.
    Best
    wishes!
    Yours,
    Alice
    (九)
    近日,某校開展了“志愿者日“的活動,鼓勵同學們利用周末走出校園,盡自己所能為所在的社區做一些力所能及的事情。并隨機給100名同學發放了調查問卷,下圖是調查問卷的統計結果。
    go
    to
    old
    people
    home
    visit
    sick
    children
    in
    the
    hospital
    clean
    up
    the
    parks
    in
    the
    community

    請你用兩段話寫一篇短文,第一段簡要說明圖表內容,第二段從圖表中選出符合你實際的一項,結合自己的經歷,談談你的志愿者日是如何度過的。
    要求:1.詞數不少于80詞;
    2.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。
    Recently,
    a
    survey
    was
    done
    among
    100
    students
    in
    a
    school
    about
    how
    students
    spent
    the
    Volunteer
    Day
    on
    weekends.
    ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    _______________________
    【滿分范文】
    Recently,
    a
    survey
    was
    done
    among
    100
    students
    in
    a
    school
    about
    how
    students
    spent
    the
    Volunteer
    Day
    on
    weekends.
    Here
    is
    the
    result.
    25%
    of
    the
    students
    chose
    to
    help
    clean
    up
    the
    parks
    in
    the
    community.
    30%
    of
    the
    students
    spent
    their
    weekends
    visiting
    sick
    children
    in
    the
    hospital.
    (高分句型一)Nearly
    half
    of
    the
    students
    went
    to
    old
    people’s
    home
    to
    visit
    the
    old
    people
    there.(簡要說明圖標內容)
    Last
    Sunday,
    I
    went
    to
    old
    people’s
    home
    with
    my
    friends
    Lucy
    and
    Sam.
    We
    cleaned
    the
    rooms
    for
    the
    old
    people
    and
    told
    them
    many
    interesting
    things
    in
    our
    school.
    They
    told
    us
    stories
    about
    the
    past
    and
    how
    things
    used
    to
    be.
    Lucy
    and
    I
    are
    both
    good
    at
    singing,
    so
    we
    sang
    for
    them.
    They
    were
    so
    happy
    and
    sang
    along
    with
    us.
    An
    old
    grandpa
    also
    taught
    us
    how
    to
    play
    kung
    fu.(高分句型二)
    Sam
    likes
    telling
    jokes
    and
    his
    jokes
    made
    the
    old
    people
    laugh
    happily.
    It
    was
    a
    really
    meaningful
    Sunday.(結合自己去敬老院的經歷)
    In
    a
    word,
    volunteering
    is
    really
    a
    great
    experience
    for
    us.
    We
    can
    get
    such
    a
    strong
    feeling
    of
    satisfaction
    from
    helping
    others.(總結與心得)
    (十)
    某校正在開展“走進新時代,爭當合格中學生“的演講比賽,請以“We
    act,we
    improve“為主題,寫一篇演講稿,談談中學生除了學習課本知識之外,還應該做些什么?
    演講稿應包括以下內容:
    (1)學會自立,誠實友善,舉止文明;
    (2)培養習慣,發展興趣,不斷創新;
    (3)關心他人,和諧相處,懂得感恩;
    (4)……
    要求:(1)要點齊全,并適當發揮;
    (2)文中不得出現真實的姓名與校名;
    (3)卷面整潔,書寫美觀,可適當加
    2﹣3
    分;
    (4)詞數:90
    詞左右.開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數.
    Ladies
    and
    gentlemen,
    We
    have
    entered
    a
    new
    area.As
    students,______________________________________
    ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
    【滿分范文】
    Ladies
    and
    gentlemen,
    We
    have
    entered
    a
    new
    area.
    As
    students,
    it’s
    our
    duty
    to
    study
    hard.
    But
    to
    be
    a
    qualified
    middle
    school
    student,
    I
    think
    we
    have
    a
    lot
    of
    things
    to
    do.(點題)
    First,
    we
    should
    learn
    to
    be
    independent
    and
    honest.
    We’re
    supposed
    to
    be
    friendly
    to
    others
    and
    behave
    politely
    in
    public.【高分句型一】
    Second,
    we
    should
    have
    good
    habits.
    Habits
    play
    an
    important
    role
    in
    our
    life.
    We’d
    better
    develop
    our
    interests
    and
    the
    ability
    to
    create.
    【高分句型二】Third,
    we
    should
    care
    more
    about
    others
    and
    be
    thankful
    to
    all
    the
    people
    who
    have
    helped
    us.
    Value
    the
    time
    we
    spend
    with
    our
    family
    and
    friends
    in
    our
    daily
    life.
    Last
    but
    not
    least,
    I
    think
    we
    should
    exercise
    more
    to
    keep
    healthy.(應該做什么)
    In
    a
    word,
    the
    more
    we
    act,
    the
    better
    we
    will
    improve.(總結全文)
    (十一)
    中學生課后活動豐富多彩,你最喜歡的是什么,請選擇其中一項,根據以下提示,以“An
    after-school
    activity“為題,寫一篇
    80
    詞左右的短文,與同學們分享。
    要點:1.你最喜歡的課后活動是什么,及課后活動的時間、地點;
    2.談談其給你帶來的益處;
    3.你的建議。
    要求:1.內容必須包括所給要點,可適當發揮,增加細節,以使行文連貫。
    2.語篇完整,語句通順,語法正確,書寫規范。
    3.文中不能出現人名、校名或地名,否則不予評分。
    An
    after-school
    activity
    There
    are
    many
    after-school
    activities.
    I
    like
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    【滿分范文】
    An
    after-school
    activity
    Students
    in
    middle
    schools
    have
    many
    kinds
    of
    after﹣school
    activities.Maybe
    they
    do
    sports,go
    hiking,watch
    TV
    or
    surf
    on
    the
    Internet.Even
    some
    students
    put
    all
    their
    free
    time
    into
    studying
    the
    textbook
    knowledge.But
    my
    favorite
    after﹣school
    activity
    is
    collecting
    stamps.Let
    me
    tell
    you
    the
    reason.(我最喜歡的課外活動)
    First,I
    can
    learn
    a
    lot
    from
    the
    stamps.There
    are
    many
    Chinese
    cultures
    in
    the
    stamps【高分句型一】.When
    I
    collect
    them,I
    can
    learn
    more
    about
    my
    motherland【高分句型二】.Second,I
    can
    make
    more
    friends.Many
    students
    love
    collecting
    stamps.Because
    of
    the
    same
    hobbies
    and
    interests,we
    can
    talk
    and
    do
    the
    same
    things.Then
    we
    can
    be
    good
    friends.(帶來的益處)
    In
    a
    word,after-school
    activities
    can
    make
    us
    relax.You
    can
    take
    up
    a
    hobby
    that
    you
    like.
    Why
    not
    join
    in
    it?(建議)
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